Interesting to see you using brevity here. I find it perfect for the emotion and the title “Simple Grief”. Outstanding poem, really powerful…the ending metaphor is striking. LikeLike Reply
I agree, very powerful in this combination of short lines and complex images. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
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Interesting to see you using brevity here. I find it perfect for the emotion and the title “Simple Grief”.
Outstanding poem, really powerful…the ending metaphor is striking.
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Thank you. Getting there. Thanks so much for your kind words.
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I agree, very powerful in this combination of short lines and complex images.
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Thanks very much.
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