Interesting to see you using brevity here. I find it perfect for the emotion and the title “Simple Grief”. Outstanding poem, really powerful…the ending metaphor is striking. Loading… Reply
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Interesting to see you using brevity here. I find it perfect for the emotion and the title “Simple Grief”.
Outstanding poem, really powerful…the ending metaphor is striking.
Thank you. Getting there. Thanks so much for your kind words.
I agree, very powerful in this combination of short lines and complex images.
Thanks very much.