Day 16

16 Monday Apr 2018

Posted by Jenifer in Tanka

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city life, futility, NaPoWriMo, Nature, Work life

how many times
have I walked through a drizzle-
dreary day like this —
ice floes across pavement slip me
quietly into their cracks

4 thoughts on “Day 16”

Jennifer G. Knoblock said:

April 16, 2018 at 4:11 pm

Winter, winter go away…
Yes, this tanka idea of yours was BRILLIANT. Such good things happening here.

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- 5h2o said:
  
  April 16, 2018 at 8:49 pm
  
  Thank you, Jennifer. I appreciate this so much. We are in the dog days of NaPoWriMo now. It hurts!! 🙂
  
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  - Jennifer G. Knoblock said:
    
    April 17, 2018 at 10:13 am
    
    no pain, no gain hahaha. clearly I am doing the “lite” version…just skipping days when I can’t get to it…
    
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  - 5h2o said:
    
    April 17, 2018 at 2:47 pm
    
    Moderation in all things …
    
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