“i find myself looking out a window between my world and yours” You expressed this so beautifully! I am in love with this poem, it has such a nostalgic feel to it. Loading… Reply
6 responses to “Day 3”
love that pivotal line, and all the resonances of the window
Thanks. Tanka are hard …. 🙂
You have the touch, though. :))
“i find myself
looking out a window
between my world and yours”
You expressed this so beautifully! I am in love with this poem, it has such a nostalgic feel to it.
Thank you! A long drive on a flat highway always gets me thinking.
Thank you! Tanka are hard . . .