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Abandoned farmhouse,
greying outbuildings.
Our old elm on the corner
that died last year
stood through the winter
to remind us of its broad
generous shade, kind relief
now removed. Empty sky.
Time unwinds, pulls me
back to your year as sapling
in crowded woods before
this town, this house.
Our kinship holds, deeper need,
as a certain kind of breath.
I bend here on your stump
flattened to the ground.
We re-entwine, vine together.
You remind me, I carry you.
You hold me, I rest upon you.
You become me, I become you.
Sometimes our roots are in places we least imagine.
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Yes. It is often a surprise. Glad you got it.
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So well expressed. There is such pain in losing a tree–especially one that that been a part of your life. We lost a maple last year, and I fear an ash is next. The drought in NV has been cruel.
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Glad this spoke to you. Losing a tree is such a heartbreak. And I imagine the climate is fragile to begin with in NV, so replanting must be a chore and a very uncertain prospect.
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Wow, that empty sky. You use the word “greying” in the first stanza and the mood just carries through, but bringing a kind of purity and renewal by the end. Love that “deeper need,/as a certain kind of breath.”
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So glad you liked it. I am trying to work on the renewal side of things … it takes its own sweet time up. 🙂
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the poem is well-crafted, but i especially like the last stanza. the repetition is so effective.
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Thank you very much. It took some fiddling. Glad it seems to have worked a bit. 🙂
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Love how you move between your feelings and your observations here, so the reader can live inside and outside of you in the poem. Really wonderful!
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So glad you liked it — thanks for that insight.
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