She swings along moontide
they say and opens up sunshine,
pulls out every bit of air
for every frozen breath on earth
her plastic feet march her
down all the lonely dreams
they say, knocking on doors
of the empty five and dimes
asking, ’Wher’d’yuh go?’ and ‘Huh?’
and they say, ’It’s a miracle!
Look, see what she brings —
what grows in her shadow!’
She labors over what she
came to know during that
long hot walk in Boston
last year that she still
has not explained to anyone
least of all herself
and yet they moan on, ’Come!
Come knock on my door! Dig in,
open my heart! Remind
me to breath!’ So she turns
and walks on, plucks one
doorbell after another, fuddled
all the while by that hum
in the back of her head
Lovely work!
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Thank you! Very kind of you to say.
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I have been mulling over this one. The imagery of the knocking on doors, “plucking” doorbells, the voices–all so strong. I get a picture of a being/force who is yet uncertain of purpose. I love the opening two lines and this:
Look, see what she brings —
what grows in her shadow!’
which has a feeling (along with all the dialogue) of a magical or mythical tale.
Intriguing work.
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I was trying to wrap both reality (from her perspective) with myth (what others see in her). So as usual, you are picking up some of the core elements. It came to me after a very demanding day at the office where everyone seemed to need me for solving problems that they should have been able to handle on their own. Sigh!
Thanks for your feedback. Very helpful, as always.
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