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Up where the invisible line
draws from this stone
to that imagined field,
where there was built
a world of fact
that begot more fact,
now history,
begetting ever more facts,
now contested history,
begetting truths,
now buried in the hearts
of my children
(who you do not know
except through me
because of you
and the way you held me,
coaxed me, cajoled me,
laughed with me),
there you once stood
as factual as this old oak.
There you built things
of your own imagination.
There you showed me those things,
gave them freely,
lavishly, with open-heart,
while history took the turns it chose,
pulling them back,
shifting the sand this way and that,
dissolving that true world
back into imagination.
But, here, see the children —
they are witnesses still.
It is written here.
This is beautiful. I love the repetition in the first stanza: it draws me in and evokes that sense of generations. Really excellent. 🙂
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Thank you!
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Truly, something special.
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This entire poem is a wonderful ode to your grandfather.
I especially love these lines:
“But, here, see the children —
they are witnesses still.
It is written here.”
I’ve recently finished going through boxes and envelopes of historical photos, and old tattered photograph books of my mothers’ — and at the same time, did a bit of digging in Ancestry.com. I’ve made three photographic history books, with my scripted words under most of the photos….one for each of our children and one for us to keep. Our children will get them for Christmas. These final words here, remind me that they will now be witnesses still. Isn’t that the most amazing thing about photographs? Sepia wonderment — in seeing who we were and who our beloved were so many years ago.
In my Cherished Series, I recently wrote a poem about my brother who suddenly passed away at 52….relates to the role of photos…
In this poem, I also like picturing your grandfather as a tall standing oak….a very strong image….then the “open heart” and the shifting sands.
Just a lovely visit with you at this special place.
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Thank you. Yes. I had always wished my kids knew my grandfather, but it was not to be. Then I realized they did know him — through me. Like your photos, we hand down so much that we don’t realize, right? And then one day, we see it!
Thanks so much for this generous and thoughtful response.
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