Waiting for the rain takes patience
in this time of life.
When I was a child it rained often
sometimes in such torrents
that we ran into the garage
and climbed on garbage cans
to watch it like the last three minutes
of the NBA finals — long,
punctuated, shouts, pauses.
We crashed the lids in imitation
and celebration.
But now it seems to drip and fuss,
as if the flowers and trees,
had just better get used to its moods,
to the ever-repeated windups
of the pitcher on the mound.
And so I wait,
hoping it does not notice my waiting,
does not as a result become sullen,
does not lurk back into its room
to storm on its own.
I honor its youthful independence
while I cajole it out,
persuade it to play fair,
beg it to freshen the air,
and to drum up all that joy one more time.
4 responses to “The rain comes when it will”
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate the feedback.
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I really like this stanza of the sulking rain…it brings me back to the opening “when I was a child.” How all things seemed more intense when we were young. I appreciate that layer of this multi-layered poem.
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Thank you. I guess everything is a bit of a child sometimes ….
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