Open spade cleaves mud,
unwraps under-earth’s treasure-trove —
twisted wires of plant roots
clinging deep,
no repentance, no shame.
I ask when will you break free,
leave us alone, untangle this mess?
You grip on, silent as black,
churning in your own direction,
to your own end, to ours.
2 responses to “When digging in my garden”
I think perhaps I should dig in my garden. I have a few things gripping and churning myself and it’s amazing what gardening can do! I like the line, “no repentance, no shame,” subtle but so exactly captures it.
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The sounds in this are wonderful, especially the first stanza. I love those hyphenated words together. I like the balance, too, and how the second follows naturally from the first–how thoughts deepen with the labor.
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