cattails carousing the pond,
giant metronomes
swaying in mixed currents,
crisscross rhythms
drumming down the afternoon sun
cattails carousing the pond,
giant metronomes
swaying in mixed currents,
crisscross rhythms
drumming down the afternoon sun
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4 responses to “7/5”
pond + music = yes. love this–“drumming down the afternoon sun”–the sun could use some drumming down. 🙂
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Based on your last poem, I agree!! Thanks as always.
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Exceptionally breathtaking!
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Thank you! That is very generous of you.
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